澳签676中辞职去旅行的工作证明这样写可以吗？

计划辞职去旅行，但是需要提供676签证材料中的工作证明材料。这样写可以吗？
To whom it may concern
Dear Sir or Madam:
We herebyconfirm that Mr. Li ***, the visa applicant,whose national passport number is G********, hasbeen working for ****(Shenzhen) Co.,Ltd. for four years since Feb 2008 and has heretofore kept a good record ofperformance. The current title of Mr. Li is Manager of the Department of systems Sales（central china）and hiscurrent salary (after-tax) is nine thousand and thirtyseven Renminbi yuan (CNY 9,037) per month.
MrLi decided to resign from this position of **** (Shenzhen) Co., Ltd. in October ofthis year., then started his gap year.. I hope he has an unforgettable trip.
Pleasekindly afford him any appropriate assistanceconcerning visa affairs in case of need. If any questions, please do not hesitateto contact ****, the Department of China Salesat +86 (755) **** ext. ****.
Sincerely,
**** （签名）
**** (Shenzhen) Co., Ltd.