美西16天行程计划，麻烦大家帮我看看

还有两周就开始美西之旅了，现在写了一个16天的美西计划，包括LA，vegas, 黄石，优胜美地，SFO等，麻烦大家帮我看看提提意见？


FROM TO Stay Driving KM 游玩

Day 0 5/26/2012 LA LA LA

Day 1 5/27/2012 LA Las Vegas Las Vegas

Day 2 5/28/2012 Vegas Williams Williams 南园

Day 3 5/29/2012 Willams Grand Canyon Page

Day 4 5/30/2012 Page Salt Lake City Salt Lake City 650

Day 5 5/31/2012 Salt Lake City Yellow Stone some where in yellow stone 5H？ west yellowstone

Day 6 6/1/2012 Yellow Stone Yellow Stone Yellow Stone Gardiner 北门

Day 7 6/2/2012 Yellow Stone Yellow Stone Yellow Stone yellowstone

Day 8 6/3/2012 Yellow Stone Twin Falls Twin Falls

Day 9 6/4/2012 Twin Falls Reno/Lake Tahoe Reno/Lake Tahoe 可选过Lake Tahoe

Day 10 6/5/2012 Reno/Lake Tahoe Yosemine Yosemine Risk On 395 - 120E

Day 11 6/6/2012 Yosemine Tracy Tracy 2H

Day 12 6/7/2012 Tracy San Francisco Carmel 1H 6-8H in SF

Day 13 6/8/2012 Carmel Camarillo Camarillo

Day 14 6/9/2012 Camarillo LA