我的单位证明，麻烦帮我看看这样写可以么

第一次申请，麻烦各位帮我看看单位证明这样写可以么？帮我改改啊～


To Whom It May Concern,

Subject: Visit Visa Application


We hereby certify that Ms. XXX, holder of passport No. GXXXX, ID No. XXX, has been employed by XXX school as XXX teacher since August,2004 and her current salary is RMB XXX per month.

We have approved Ms XXX 's maternity leave from Dec 18th’08 to Jun 1st’09. Here means the paid holidays.

We further certificate that Ms XXX would like to take her maternity leave by joining a pleasure trip to Germany during her vacation. The purpose of XXX 's trip is visiting her friend. She will abide by local laws and regulations. All cost of the trip will be paid by the applicant.

Upon her return to Shenzhen, she will resume her duty on Jun 1st’09 in our school. We are confident that Qin yiyun will return to work on time.

We would be very grateful if you would approve XXX 's application for a visit visa. Should you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact us on XXX. Our fax number is XXXX. Our address is XXX.


Very truly yours,

To Whom It May Concern,

Subject: Visit Visa Application


We hereby certify that Ms. XXX, holder of passport No. GXXXX, ID No. XXX, has been employed by XXX school as XXX teacher since August,2004 and her current salary is RMB XXX per month.

We have approved Ms XXX 's maternity leave from Dec 18th’08 to Jun 1st’09. Here means the paid holidays.

We further certificate that Ms XXX would like to take her maternity leave by joining a pleasure trip to Germany during her vacation. The purpose of XXX 's trip is visiting her friend. She will abide by local laws and regulations. All cost of the trip will be paid by the applicant.

Upon her return to Shenzhen, she will resume her duty on Jun 1st’09 in our school. We are confident that Qin yiyun will return to work on time.

We would be very grateful if you would approve XXX 's application for a visit visa. Should you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact us on XXX. Our fax number is XXXX. Our address is XXX.


Very truly yours,

xxx school

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