给VO的信，帮忙看看，给点意见是否需要修改！同

首先感谢游四海旅游上的一些前辈，提供了模板给我参考。

我这里有一些疑问，是否有必要在信中提及我与我太太与其他两位合伙人共同拥有一家公司？

父亲拥有自己的公司也需要提及吗？感觉写太多这些会很累赘。

希望得到各位的提点与指导，谢谢！



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To Whom It May Concern，


I am the applicant Bo Huang (Passport No.G*******). This letter is written on behalf of myself as well as my wife (Yan Wang, Passport No.G*******), my father (Linyou Huang, Passport No.G*******) and my mother(Yanxia Ye, Passport No.G*******). I and my parents go traveling a lot since we love traveling so much; Meanwhile, I had got chances to have my further education (Master degree) in the U.K. and visit many Europe countries during my holidays aborad. Last year, I and my parents had experienced a perfect vacation in Europe (included Italy, Austria, Germany, Switzerland, France, Czech and Slovakia) for 30 days. This trip not only widen our vision but also gave us a lot of aborad traveling experience.


As I and my wife got married on January this year, we haven't got chance to have a honeymoon to celebrate out marriage. Australia is a place my wife have been dreaming of for so long. Sydney and the Great Ocean Road impress her so much and she always dream that she could walk along the Darling Harbour with me someday. As well as, I am deeply reacted on Melbourne - the city with great history. Thus, Australia is the best place for us to enjoy our honeymoon as well as our coming 1st Anniversary. Furthermore, we would like to invite our parents coming with us and share our laughter and happyness during this trip. And make it to be an amazing story for their life.


Now, I and my wife are planning a holiday to visit Austrilia as it is just possible for us to enjoy our honeymoon there at that moment. So as to carry out this plan, I, my wife and my parent applied for an annual leave and multiple entry visa from 2nd December 2010 to 11th January 2011, and it has been approved by our the companys.


I hereby make it clear that I will be responsible for all the expenses, including the transportation, accommodation, food, recreation and others that may occur during this trip for my wife.Thank you for your time and consideration. Please feel free to contact us for any questions you may have.


Yours faithfully,

(me) (my wife)

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